Two new updates! Wow!

Well, technically they're new. I made these 2 as a part of my playwrighting elective at camp. As you can see, they're quite different from my usual writing style as these have been made for theatre purposes.

But the emotions in it? Always personal.

United In Pain

A group of teenagers wander into the park at mid-day. They proceed to take crazy pictures at the playground. However, one boy stays back and decides to sit at the park bench.

A girl walks into the park and sits under a willow tree, within viewing distance from where the boy sits.

Boy: There they go. So noisy, so cheerful, so happy, so… typical of everyone my age. There’s Josh now, being all boss-like and telling everyone where to sit for their pictures. Isn’t that Ansom sitting next to Janet? Always acting like Janet’s best friend but it’s all too obvious that he’s smitten with her girl-next-door ways. And where’s Jasmine? I know she wouldn’t miss me at all but I do like to hope otherwise.

Girl: Would he ever know? Would he even care if he knew? Why can’t he pick up all the hints I’ve been dropping? Maybe he did pick them up but he doesn’t feel the same way as I do?

Boy: I just want to be there with them now, doing stupid, irrational things. So why can’t I? Why am I not running to the playground, jumping on top of that pile that they’ve formed on top of Jason? No wait, I know. Yes, it’s always been there. Yes, a wall.

Girl: It’s said that there’s no point crying over spilt milk. What’s done is done. But what if done, has not been done? Can I cry then? Should I cry that I’ve never told him, or be glad that I never gave him the chance to turn me down?

Boy: This isn’t the first time you know. I’ve been making new friends from a new school ever since primary school. I’m already in university now. So that’s like… four ‘friendship initiations’. Four times that I’ve looked for friendly faces that would accept me into their clique. And each time, that wall is there.

Girl: But he’s the sweetest thing I’ll ever know. Who else would humor me when all I want to do is to sulk all day? Who else would coach me, encourage me and coax me with math? Who else would brighten my day with a smile?

Boy: It blocks me. It restricts me. It keeps me to myself. I try to socialize, I try to do things a friend does. I hold the door for the girls and I trash-talk with the guys. But why does it seem so fake? Why do they laugh when I don’t see what’s so funny? Why do they run and scream when all I want to do is roll my eyes and snigger?

Girl: And he’s oh so popular. The prettier girls try to get him go to classes with them together but I’m usually faster than them most of the time. But I see that flash of annoyance now. He quickly hides it with a shining smile but oh I see it. He prefers their attention over mine.

Boy: I guess it’s me. Not anyone else, not what God has done, not by fate but me. I say it’s a wall but I know it’s me. My mannerisms, my ways, my quirks and my idiosyncrasies. It’s me as a person, the whole package. I’m the odd piece that would never fit into the whole puzzle.

Girl: And I thought telling him about how I feel would make him focus more on me. Pretty myself up for the big moment I did. Make-up, lip gloss, the whole works. But when I saw him cuddling up to Stephanie this morning…

Boy: So I guess I should go home now, turn on the computer and write a blog entry about how normal today was and how fine I am. Living on with the façade of normalcy. But I’m not normal. There’s something wrong with me but I just can’t seem to change. How can I change when I don’t know what’s there to change? Nothing to do but to move on with life I guess.

Girl: So I should move on I guess. There are other fishes in the sea, so the saying goes. Maybe I should go for that shark, maybe that swordfish. Forget the sweet dolphin I know and move on.

Their eyes meet briefly and they walk off.

No one can

A: After all that we have shared, how could you do this to me?

B: Well, what did you expect? I only wanted to help you.

A: Help me? You nearly caused my death!

B: How would I know that telling everyone your secret would nearly kill you? I just wanted you to be helped!

A: I don’t need your help!

B: Are you sure? I’m pretty sure when you came crying to me you were all, “Oh B, help me, help me!.”

A: That… that was different then! I needed a listening ear, someone to hear me out. Not someone to act out on what I said!

B: Trust me, I had the best of intentions for you. I wanted to make sure that problem of yours was solved.

A: It’s not a problem! I just wanted you to hear about it and maybe give me a bit of advice, talk to me about and at the end we’d have a good laugh. Not storm out of your room and went God knows where!

B: I went to Reverend Goodwill. He of all people would know what to do.

A: Sure, go to the reverend who’s a bloody fanatic of all things good and pure. But to people who he thinks is ‘unclean’ and of not good heart, oh boy are they going to suffer.

B: What reverend did was of good intention. He wanted everyone to help you, to share in your suffering and alleviate you from your sin. I’m sure he did not mean for everyone to be disgusted by your… your problem.

A: Well he thought wrong. If I did not run out of town the very second I saw the first light of a torch over the hill next to my house, I’d be breathing dust and eating maggots right now.

B: Then at least be glad you’re alive! Do not blame me for what I did to try and help you. Please understand I did it from the bottom of my heart to help you.

A: You can’t help me. No one can.

If

Dear Liz,

You might be surprised to receive this letter from me. Well, I wouldn’t blame you. We do meet in school 5 days a week! Why didn’t I just convey this message to you in person, right? Well, it’s not that simple. Sometimes speech cannot do justice to an emotion. Sometimes speech fails you in the most inopportune of times. Or maybe sometimes, people are just better in expressing themselves through writing rather than speaking. Like me.

Time to get to the point, as you once so politely said to a teacher who was going in circles educating about the ‘Birds and the Bees’. Well, here it is. Liz, I like you. Ever since I got to know you and your little quirks (like pinching others when you have a hiccup to pass it on), I always wondered if you have ever felt the same way about me. We know enough about each other to find ‘Truth or Dare’ between us boring. My friends have become your friends and vice versa.

I like you so much now that I look at your every action towards me with a glimmer of hope. “Did that smile mean anything more than usual?” “Why is she telling me that Cathy Jonson is so not my type?” It’s a question that cannot be held back any longer.

Do you like me too? Do you Liz?

Cause if you do Liz, I can bring something special to your life. I could

Jon stopped writing. Skimming through the hardest letter which he would ever write, he dropped his pen and sighed after reading the last paragraph. It was not that Jon felt his letter was too mushy or too honest-to-God truthful; in fact he’d want his letter to emit his exact emotion, nothing more or nothing less.

It was the effect(s) his letter (if he completed it) might cause when delivered to Liz, which worried Jon. That girl shared one trait with John; they both were honest people. Brutally honest people, that is. If Liz didn’t like a boy who was hitting on her, she’d go up to his face and make sure he got it into his brain that she did not like him, and was not playing hard-to-get. It was this trait which drew them close as friends, Jon often reasoned.

If Liz felt the same way about him, no problemo, everyone lives happily ever after, the end. If she didn’t…

She would ring him up the every instant she was finished with that letter. She would politely request for Jonathan Isaac Quentin if his mum picked up the phone, and would get down to business when Jon answers. Her voice would have a cordial tone, but her content would be serious. She would say that she appreciates his attention and is flattered that he likes her, but she does not feel the same way and that probably would not change in the foreseeable future. She would wrap everything up nicely by wishing that their friendship would remain strong and that Jon would find someone more deserving. Jon however, would know that in the conversations that they would hold thereafter, she would carry herself cautiously in the wish of not wanting to give him any false hope.

Jon sighed again, as if the very breath would relieve some of the tension building up in his head. If only he had the same power Mel Gibson had in the movie “What Women Want” and he’d have Liz staring at him with dreamy eyes and not the other way around.

Jon was not going to drag this on any longer. He was going to decide there and then if he should continue liking Liz. Finish the letter if he was going to tell her or drop it completely and cease all fantasies.

Rubbing the temples for the umpteenth time, he sat in serious contemplation. “Liz, oh Liz” he thought, “should I give you the choice to reject or accept me or keep silent like a coward?”

Moments and minutes passed and the stalemate ended with Jon picking up his pen again. He continued:

look at you with dreamy eyes and tell you with not a hint of lie in sight that you are the most talented and amazing and beautiful and funniest girl I would ever meet. I could hold you steady in troubled times. I could be your ‘Knight in shining armour’, however cliché that might be.

I could… but in all honesty, no. I can’t.

It’s more than our friendship at stake. I cannot possibly fathom a time where you would screen your every word just because of me. I am of no authority to force you to change who you really are just to shield me from pain. Who am I to change you, as a result of my selfish desires? You continue to be who you are; glib and honest.

Who am I to prevent you from making this decision yourself? No one I guess. That’s the advantage of writing an unsent letter; it hasn’t been sent yet. A handy tool, I must say, for those who suffer from cowardice.

Your honest-to-God friend,
Jonathan Isaac Quentin

Of times past

It wasn’t so much the pain of not being a part of John’s life anymore which hurt. It was more of the pain of not being acknowledged anymore, the pain which came when John’s eyes gave him a quick dismissal every time they met.

Not acknowledging him was as good as denying a large part of his own life. He was John’s cushion when bad times were around. He was the one who listened patiently to John’s woes. He was the one John squeezed tightly when John saw his first horror movie. And most of all, he was the one whom John shared many nights with; sharing an embrace so tight they were almost one.

And all this, did not all this mean anything to John? Did John not understand his need for him? Did John not understand that only together, would his existence be purposeful? Did not John understand the light and warmth he brought to him? A world without John. A world without light and warmth. That was what he was experiencing now.

A beam of light shone through a crack. Slowly but surely, the crack grew bigger. A figure, something so instinctively familiar to him, blocked the now radiant and warm light. John. He was back! The world around him was now of colours and heat abound. Did John not realise of his profound effect on him? Surely, John realised his folly and wanted him back?

Alas, it was not to be. John’s eyes bore indifference when he swept his eyes over him. John stayed for only a few moments longer and left yet again, bringing back the coldness and darkness of his world once again.

Down below, John locked the attic door. He never did like entering the lifeless attic to search for extra stationery, with all the old and mouldy stuff in it. Especially that old bolster.

Prologue

Hello world!

Writing has always been something I've taken for granted. I just used it as a means to get as high as possible a grade for English. You could say it's like a gun, only used when it has to be used, and which jammed on me at a crucial moment (read 'O' levels).

So anyway, here I am using it to express ideas, feelings, fantasies, thoughts and many other intangible matter. I just hope through frequent postings (I aim to write a story, fictional or not, at least twice a week) that my ability to express is fine tuned.

Constructive comments are greatly welcomed, please leave them in the comment box. A tag box was not created on purpose as I feel people would put more thought into the words they leave as comments, not passing remarks.

I hope to update every saturday, be it a fictional or non-fictional story.

That's pretty much it and I look forward to a wonderful literary journey with you all!

P.S. Any similarities found in my stories and my life are purely coincidental. Then again, probably not.